Bodega Dreams Scene "Betrayal"

I feel like this piece is one of my best. I have a passion for writing stories and just writing generally so it feels like I got to let out a lot of my ways and talents of writing my own prediction to a story. It is a scene to a prediction to what would happen in Bodega Dreams after a Huge part in the story. Mine was mostly all about making the reader feel really anxious, and to build a lot of suspense.

Also I feel like this is my best piece because, I have been told many times that I am very creative and that I am good in writing. Also I have been told that I have a wild imagination. By being told all these I like to think about them when I am writing and when I do I feel like I write much better. I have been creative and used my wild imagination and my skill of writing in this piece and thats why I feel like it is my best work.

   

Rites Of Passage

This year could be described as a Rite Of Passage for me. This year I felt invincible and I felt like as a teenager I was on top of the world. It's like what all teenagers think because we are at our strongest and fastest stages of our lives. I was always running around and being a daredevil and throwing caution to the wind. Also I loved to show off to people by doing stupid and dangerous things and trying to be really cool with it. Not only me but I have a lot of friends that do that too. However recently this year and good person and friend of mine passed away. He was a very confident guy and always looked like he was on top of the world. the thing that caught me was that he was the same age as me and now he is gone. It teaches me that death can be so unexpected and can happen to anyone. Thats why now I  take things into perspective knowing that we are just as fragile as other people out there and that things bad or good can happen to anyone. So now before anything stupid and non thought out is about to be done Ill look twice before the action is done.